Sword fight with grandpa. I wear my cape. There is a skull on the sword. Spikie guard with hammer and a mask. A bridge, a king and a dragon. Grandpa has Lord of the Rings Sword. Use pretend blood in movies. Take the ring to the castle city. I haven't got one. The castle city is scary. The brown dog and a bat flying and a big spider. No ghosts. They're not alive. It's pretend story. (mom here: I'm just typing here..... not trying to make sense of it....... but he's on a roll!).
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A king of the world. Bridge of the king. Can fly on a dragon. Throw a hammer. The dragon's head. Scared of that one in the movie.
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That is me. Getting ready for the sword fight. He's mad. Grumpy eyes. Black Gate, brown rock and fire hair and grey eyes. And a black tower of course. Org. He's fighting. I'm pretending a movie. Get out of my tent. The tower blows up, run away. Crash down the black tower and hit it. Boom. That's it, end of story. (Mom here: whew, that was a very animated story, wish you could have seen all the "action" going on here)
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wow nevin that looks like fun!!! great job on your writing too!!!
amy flege · 2008-02-05: 22:31
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That was a VERY exciting story!
Kelly Stone · 2008-02-05: 22:49
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Nevin, your grandpa is cool. I like your sword and I like your story!
Austin · 2008-02-06: 10:16
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Awesome story!!
Amy · 2008-02-06: 17:08
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I really like your sword, Nevin. You wrote a good long story. It might be scary. Your friend, Britton
MyHangout · 2008-02-06: 18:47
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Wow, Nevin! You wrote a great story! It was exciting for me to read. Please keep writing. Britton's Mom, Marilyn
Marilyn · 2008-02-06: 18:56
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This is AWESOME Nevin!!! I LOVED your story! Angela just got back from a very big trip. Maybe instead of doing the pictures myself, I'll have her do it on her own blog. You're one very smart guy!
Leah · 2008-02-18: 20:18
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