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Day 98 Millbrook Community Garden
2010.07.13
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I really like the first one (although I'm also a flower junkie). I think if you'd narrowed the aperture from f/8 to f/11, more of that strong visual - the fence - would have been in focus. You might want to consider cropping No. 3 tighter to exclude the OOF St. John's wort (?) in the foreground and just concentrate on the two beautifully coloured ones above.
revenant · 2010-07-20: 17:40
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I don't know whether you want criticism, but I'll plough ahead anyway! By cropping in No. 3, I meant trying this: About 10% off the top About 15% off the bottom About 20% off the right. Hope it's ok if I mention what is, after all, only a suggestion.
revenant · 2010-07-20: 17:43
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I welcome the critique! I will try your suggestions with respect to cropping, and I'll post the result here.
McMommy · 2010-07-20: 19:23
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Also, with respect to your remark about narrowing the aperture in #1, you'll note that at this point, I was still shooting in 'automatic'... my leap outside the box didn't happen until the 16th :)
McMommy · 2010-07-20: 19:28
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I love the first one. I've been looking at the picture since the beginning of your 365 challenge, and I think that you just keep getting better !
lismel · 2010-12-17: 17:36
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