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So pretty and lovely... :)
????? · 2011-08-26: 13:30
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Nice composition and expression. Colors of subject stand out nicely against the background. You can pp and darken the bg to get more contrast. Focus seems a bit off with sharpness more on the wall. Hair and left side of t-shirt a bit overexposed that can be fixed durin g pp. I would also prefer a bit more space above the head. :)
chweeleng · 2011-08-26: 20:30
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Congrats on the great timing, this is a very nice photo! I would have to disagree with the space above her head. I think its just about right as is. Of course these things are very subjective :)
Grapefruit · 2011-08-27: 03:49
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Definitely much better now! Good portrait :)
chweeleng · 2011-08-27: 06:56
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Another bonus of giving more space at the top - a lighter strip of concrete above the subject's head can now be seen - this complements the light tone and shape of the floor giving the image better balance. A subtle but critical finish to the final image.
chweeleng · 2011-08-27: 08:38
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