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58/366 - Echoes In A Stairway

2012.02.27
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A well lit stairway, with a solitary climber. Do you see him?

Note: The lesson learned is after the short story below. Even if you stop here - I really appreciate your visit! Thank you.
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First "They" Kiss - 1967

There are "they”…

And there are “we”…

“They” are the cute ones …

The dreamy ones…

The “hot” ones.

“We” are the OK ones…

The dreaming ones…

The “almost cool” ones.

“They” and “we”

We talk about it…

We think about it…

We lie about it…

Today it happened.

“They” and “we”

Specifically - “She” and “me”

In the stairway – after school…

Never saw it coming.

A sweet word – from her. A giggle.

A soft touch to my hand.

A tender kiss to my lips…

First "they" kiss –

Imagine that – in the stairway-first "they" kiss.

A “me” and a “she” (of the "theys)

Echoes in an empty stairway…a good sound.

djr 2/27/12
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Lesson Learned: The old saying "Never in your wildest dreams" is more often untrue than it is true - so never stop dreaming.
25 Comments
MoMac Actually I thought I could see two figures , one onthe 2nd landing and one going up or down the 3rd set of stairs. '
MoMac · 2012-02-27: 06:03
jennyLit great shot to illustrate this story! you can tell by the photo how echoey that stairwell is!
jennyLit · 2012-02-27: 07:52
asaljepret nice set..
asaljepret · 2012-02-27: 08:39
photodeclair nice photo and also nice story !
photodeclair · 2012-02-27: 08:45
pcmcgarry Great story, you never forget your first kiss. I see him, going up.
pcmcgarry · 2012-02-27: 09:17
mrmeliska Nice shot...Love the way it is lit..
mrmeliska · 2012-02-27: 09:17
Arie GREAT photo that really fit nicely with the story.
Arie · 2012-02-27: 10:04
????? great story!! I even kept up with all of the pronoun groups, yeah!!! love the pic too!
????? · 2012-02-27: 10:26
MARETKA88 Lil Danny getting his first *kiss*...those echos weren't moans were they....cool pic and wonderful story...you stud !!
MARETKA88 · 2012-02-27: 11:16
paintbox I can hear the echoes.
paintbox · 2012-02-27: 11:37
EvaLizette I just love this ....Its so great Dan ..Words ,picture :)
Made me remember my first one...sighs in the sledge hill a cold winter evening :)
Wonderful memories
EvaLizette · 2012-02-27: 12:12
Ryana He is in the middle ... right?

Ohhh, loving memorie!! Perfect picture!
Ryana · 2012-02-27: 14:18
nynkeb Lovely memories... Great shot!!
nynkeb · 2012-02-27: 14:55
darfoster Fun memory and post!
darfoster · 2012-02-27: 15:14
girafferacing I love the repetition in this shot Dan!
girafferacing · 2012-02-27: 16:05
breizh Yeahhhhhhhhh ! ........ Meowwwwwwwwwww ! ... :-)
breizh · 2012-02-27: 16:17
Eiram This stairway reminds me of a Swedish horror movie I saw many many years ago - there is something sinister in this shot...
Eiram · 2012-02-27: 17:05
digitalideas Great memory posting Dan, i believe i see him in the third set of stairs
digitalideas · 2012-02-27: 17:59
djnana Super image - sweet memory!
djnana · 2012-02-27: 19:23
Keryl I always enjoy reading your stories Dan. Really, I do.
I also enjoy reading Gregg's comments...you stud!
Keryl · 2012-02-28: 12:59
tomie not stairway to heaven but great stairway nevertheless!
tomie · 2012-02-28: 15:33
lukesmom I love the whole tone of your story; really nice! Innocence & romance....And yes, I see the lone guy in the stairwell but wouldn't had you not pointed him out!
lukesmom · 2012-02-28: 21:40
helys Great memories
Nice lights,
Great graphisms
helys · 2012-02-29: 11:25
caroleagle Wonderful colours!
caroleagle · 2012-03-01: 17:34
renatomartins The person on the stairs mkes the shot. Very nice.
renatomartins · 2012-03-04: 09:39
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