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THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL! (; Very well done. I love them.
MarcoCastagnaro · 2008-05-12: 11:12
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They look ok!
bacco66 · 2008-05-12: 17:48
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Hmmm, so you're doin a brochure, huh? ;) I think your style of photography is great for advertising like this, for new condos. I'm gonna try out some constructive criticism here, since you asked for feedback. I love the angle of number 4, how it shows the balconies and all of that, except I don't think the cement wall and pile of rocks do well for marketing the beauty of the place. But the vivid color and clarity is wonderful. Number 7 has a much better foreground =) I might have zoomed in a little bit farther in that one. Same thing in number 5, the building looks kind of small in the whole frame, although the composition is beautiful and artistic. Maybe that's a good thing for the brochure, you left room for them to write a slogan or something on top of the image =). I love the angle in number 8, it shows a really pretty side of the building. The sand at the bottom gives texture, and the chain-link fence is an interesting foreground for artistic framing... but the sand and fence might be a little too "grungy" for photos of brand-new condos in a polished brochure, you know what I'm sayin'? I love the photo though. The contrast looks good in all of these, except I think the edits overexposed the sky a little bit. I think you could see a lot of improvement if you darken the sky. Number 6 has great color, and succeeds at looking modern and sleek. I really like it. Same with number 2. Overall, I think you did great. I'd be really interested in what the business thinks of this set. Or even what the final brochure looks like!
Amethyst · 2008-05-18: 17:51
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