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Tranquility

2007.02.28














These were for a Digital Photo 1 Project
7 Comments
stsanto I'm not pro.. but I'm gonna act like as if I'm one and talk big here :) take what you think you can and chuck the rest to rubbish bin....

#1. this is a very common angel, try different viewpoint to make it interesting.

#2. the top crop seems half-hearted, if you want to crop, crop more, if no, give more space on top of the object for breathing.

#7, this is my favorite :)

#8, #9. the blur object in front part seems distracting. Is this edited in photoshop use the blur tool? if you want to show DOF, show it progressive, better if you have vertical line more than the horizontal one.

#15. try to set focus on the detailed part, in this case it's the gears? (#17 too)


stsanto · 2007-03-02: 02:54
stsanto for the pro out there, please debate me... I wanna know how right/wrong I am as I'm learning too :)
stsanto · 2007-03-02: 02:55
stsanto ps.: angel on comment #1 was meant to be angle... Arrgghhh... can't edit it anymore :p me and my lousy spelling.
stsanto · 2007-03-02: 02:56
jmalinowski this collection is very well done-I agree on # 1 and #2 though. #7, 8,9 and 10 are great, very clean and sharp. Successful choice of focal point
jmalinowski · 2007-03-02: 19:53
scientik I like the fisrt two ones
scientik · 2007-03-04: 19:10
stsanto hey... you took out the some pictures from here, suddenly the comments don't make sense anymore cos the photo number is not as it was before this :)
stsanto · 2007-03-04: 22:59
magpy I love the 8th one
all are fun!
magpy · 2007-03-05: 17:00
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