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Lonely Pier

2008.03.08
Dockside, Kent, UK

An old photo and some words (which I changed a bit) from Janet Boyd's poem "Crumbling Pier"

I do not want to wait by the lonely pier
I want the crowds of people and clear sky
I do not want to find no one there
I want there to be another

Original Poem by Janet Boyd aka Bee Spit:

Crumbling Pier

Standing upon a sturdy pier
White clouds drawing pictures
The water below so blue and clear
Surrounded with contented futures

This is only a dream and not reality
It is only illusion in the minds eye
Only something you want to be
And it will only pass you by

Standing on a crumbling pier
Storm clouds pressing you down
The water dark and full of fear
Surrounded with dismal burdens

Can you change the dream to reality
Will you fill the minds eye with beauty
Make it something that will truly be
And enduring over time for me

I do not want to dock at a crumbling pier
I want the strong pier and clean water
I do not want to find no one there
I want there to be another
23 Comments
cobaltbutterfly Very nice composition.
cobaltbutterfly · 2008-03-07: 21:15
emmetan love the colours....
emmetan · 2008-03-07: 21:24
urmysunshine I love the red as the focal point- very nice!~ R
urmysunshine · 2008-03-07: 22:54
Gwadannie very nice !!
Gwadannie · 2008-03-07: 23:10
mintra Lovely post, nice shot.
mintra · 2008-03-08: 00:41
tantatantan nice composition and very good colours!
tantatantan · 2008-03-08: 02:56
fionarobinson i really like, the splash of red and the distance in the photo.
fionarobinson · 2008-03-08: 03:49
musiic very good :)
musiic · 2008-03-08: 04:55
Nayah Wonderful perspective!
Nayah · 2008-03-08: 05:45
jet28 Great perspective :-)
jet28 · 2008-03-08: 06:38
oldbabe But sometimes a lonely pier is nice.
oldbabe · 2008-03-08: 08:09
Aniruddha Very cool contrast and frame.
Aniruddha · 2008-03-08: 10:14
mrutherford22 Stunning color. It's beautiful!
mrutherford22 · 2008-03-08: 10:47
LotoFoto I love how it's framed. Great perspective.
LotoFoto · 2008-03-08: 10:57
yamaleekis Precious composition. Regards
yamaleekis · 2008-03-08: 13:33
Mertxe forgive me for my no coment
yast to say that I have pass
Mertxe · 2008-03-08: 14:11
photopoet Love the angle.
photopoet · 2008-03-08: 19:19
mclps Great perspective! Lovely poem. :)
mclps · 2008-03-08: 21:31
BlueLady I love the composition and the angle! Very nice!
BlueLady · 2008-03-09: 04:06
evako soo intensive colours, i really like this composition.
evako · 2008-03-09: 07:41
ninjamarathonman I like the warmth and coolness of the colors.
ninjamarathonman · 2008-03-09: 12:09
thepictureman The red really makes the photo. I like the wide angle perspective.
thepictureman · 2008-03-09: 15:23
hazaj Interesting photo.
hazaj · 2008-03-12: 05:02
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