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Katil yang sopan (The Innocent Bed)

2008.08.29
Katil yang sopan 1

Katil yang sopan 2

Katil yang sopan 3

It is a Friday. I am rather bored. Still wondering why some people can take pictures of normal day to day items but still make them look good in the photograph.

This is my first take on this so if you're reading this, please critic and comment so that I can improve. THanks :D
9 Comments
the guest "katil yang sopan"???

3rd picture, shaky... I think, you need to have a focus point, even though you're taking a shot of a "normal" object...
the guest · 2008-08-29: 02:03
declancorrigan the first shot is the one with most promise, the thing i think about shots such as these is that framing and composition 'rules' are very important. look at where the top of the headboard is it is on a perfect third, perhaps if the foot of the bed (or the colour change in the sheet) were placed on the bottom third(ie taken from slightly higher angle), the vase is well placed, the computer could balance the shot if brought forward and perhaps have something to reinforce your message on screen?
declancorrigan · 2008-08-29: 05:22
shammin try to compose the frame using 1/3 rule and use unusual angle to potray the bed.
shammin · 2008-08-31: 13:56
anwarfahmi Nak improve? letak awek satu atas tu. Setel.
anwarfahmi · 2008-09-01: 21:56
shammin apsal satu je, letak sampai tak nampak katil la...
shammin · 2008-09-01: 23:21
sandalsilver haha wei kalo ada perempuan atas katil tu tak sopan ler jadinya
sandalsilver · 2008-09-02: 03:58
rustynail kenak aku rasa mcm satu mcm jak katil ya?!!!!
rustynail · 2008-09-04: 06:45
anwarfahmi Yang penting kena ada awek atas tu. Tak kira satu ke tiga ratus ke. Ko tak penting, sandalsilver. he he he.
anwarfahmi · 2008-09-05: 08:05
????? uish2....
????? · 2008-09-10: 20:14
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