Fade Away

With time you fade from my heart and mind…it has taken much too long. I wish that things were different and I could forget you as easily as you had walked away. Perhaps it would have been better if we never met…

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      2010.12.10 Edited

      I think this is really nice. Your depth of focus is great for this photo, albeit that blurry piece up front/left could do with being removed. The lines and composition check out nicely, and lead the eye across the page. However it seems a *tad* overexposed, in that you lose some of the crucial strands and things are just broken off, the lines going to the right. The great thing about this photo though, is that it leaves you thinking it's a great microbiology photograph, it looks almost like a cell of some sort. And then a spiky plant comes to mind, and wondering what you wanted to convey in emotions with this. Great job, overall. :)