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Crashing Down

  • Posted March 21, 2012 by Antonio Gil Viewed 3308 times

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Crashing down on me
by Marilyn Poe

I have lost all focus
so lost and confused
My body is here
but my mind has drifted off shore
It is sailing in the wrong direction
hoping to find a pristine destination
I hope I make it through these
waves and the stormy weather
cross the sea to a land where everything is
the waves are crashing all over me, I may sink
and drown
unless I can learn to overcome the wicked waters
of my mind…


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    • # Renato Martins

      Esta lembra o 9/11 (fora disso é muito interessante). Só nao consigo descobrir se é real ou edicao... :)

      2012.03.25 Edited Reply Cancel

    • # Unreal

      There is something strange on it... I don't know what is it... Anyway very good idea and... work? :)

      2012.03.23 Edited Reply Cancel

    • # Christa

      Wow, espero que o piloto puxou a alavanca à tempo para completar o looping..gosto também das cores.

      2012.03.22 Edited Reply Cancel

    • # Nynke

      The feeling so intensely described in the poem, is dramatically made visible by your picture. Awesome post!!

      2012.03.22 Edited Reply Cancel

    • # Felecia

      Fantastic photo and great song Antonio. It looks like that plane is actually crashing. Is it?? I certainly hope not.

      2012.03.22 Edited Reply Cancel