NARCISSUS

by Antonio Gil June. 28, 2014 3170 views

part one: narcissus
by Helen R


he leans in, closer to
the face in the water and
eros strikes his heart.

he sees the marvel and the joy and
it’s so beautiful he
can’t look away.

as he moves, the
stranger moves as well and
even though the gods are
cruel and fickle and angry, he
thanks them when it gets dark.

the leaves are falling now and
the stranger in the water looks
weary and starving but he
can’t bring himself to
look away.

it’s winter first and then the
spring notices the boy is gone,
a story of days gone by with
nothing but a flower
in his place.

♫♫ NARCISSUS (ORIGINAL SONG) FEAT. ARTGIRLSREALITY ♫♫ [youtube.com]

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Josy 5 years, 2 months ago

Un vide bleu qui se demande pourquoi le garçon est parti...

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Sadhya Rippon 5 years, 2 months ago

I like the composition of this, and the colour. I think I would be inclined to make the almost vertical vertical. What do you think. Am I too picky?

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Roxanne 5 years, 2 months ago

yes, where do you get these amazing pairings? that blue is just luscious. and Narcissus has always fascinated me.

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Lisa Kurpjuweit 5 years, 2 months ago

i do same question, do you pole dancing in the bathroom ? :)

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Larry Sample 5 years, 2 months ago

Great post! Tomorrow Goldman?

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Marilyn Grimble 5 years, 2 months ago

There are times when a flower replacement may be the very best thing to pass! Certainly reminds me of times passed! :-))

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
Dan Ravasio 5 years, 2 months ago

a wow shot and companion verse.. where do you get these amazing pairings...

5 years, 2 months ago Edited
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