COME WITH ME IN A TOUR ACROSS OLD LISBON - VII (CLEANING UP THE TOWN - COMMERCE SQUARE)

by Antonio Gil April. 07, 2015 3910 views

scour the walls

Storm brown waters
flood the plain
grave stone upended
goats bleat, astray on the hillside.

The huge full moon is mirrored
this first night
since she left.

She left a note.
She yearned for sunshine
for happiness.

It was no coincidence my smooth tongued cousin
visited last Friday.


She held the mirror to my face
and said
“Just look at yourself”.
But I could not.


I will
scrub the floors
scour the walls
rebuild the fences
call in the goats.


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♫♫ THE BUS BOYS - CLEANIN' UP THE TOWN (GHOSTBUSTERS SOUNDTRACK) ♫♫ [youtube.com]

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Tomie Poodle 6 years, 2 months ago

Belle série! Elles sont toutes intéressantes.

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Jay 6 years, 2 months ago

Really like the first photo. Kind of makes me dizzy to look at it though.

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Sadhya Rippon 6 years, 2 months ago

Oh, well done. I really like this set.

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Eiram Marie 6 years, 2 months ago

I like this very much! The first is magic!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Dany 6 years, 2 months ago

De magnifiques prises de vues de cette architecture, un régal pour les yeux !

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Gillian Parsons 6 years, 2 months ago

Love to see them keeping it all up to standard!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Brenda Nelson 6 years, 2 months ago

Love, love, love that first one! Some photogs might have discarded that jewel!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Larry Sample 6 years, 2 months ago

Always an adventure!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Teo Montana 6 years, 2 months ago

Love your edits! Fav too!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Olga Helys 6 years, 2 months ago

This reminds me all my best memories in this marvelous city
Like the first one

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Marilyn Grimble 6 years, 2 months ago

I like the first too!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Gonia 6 years, 2 months ago

you show this city from a strange point of view. In my opinion one of the most beautiful city in Europe. I hope I'll visit it one day. Not this year. Greetings!

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
Chris Cann 6 years, 2 months ago

I don't know what you've done with #1 but I like it, very nicely done Antonio.

6 years, 2 months ago Edited
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