testing

by Jan Eljapa January. 14, 2009 3271 views

Editing night again.. just wanted to see how this one looked on photoblog. please dont hold back on critics. Trying to learn:-)

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Elclic 8 years, 7 months ago

i prefer the edited one, a lot more warmer

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Gina Marie 8 years, 7 months ago

i prefer the edited version- i'm an addict for supersaturated photos, but i think it might have been a *tiny* bit too much, especially around the girl's arm. the key is to make it look vivid- but real.

you've MASTERED aligning the geometry of the architecture with the photo's frame. i still cannot achieve that perfectly-parallel look, and i've been avoiding architecture for that very reason.

overall, great work :)

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Mar 8 years, 7 months ago

Ik vind de kleuren in de bewerkte mooier, maar in tegenstelling tot wat velen hier zeggen, de lichtinval van de ramen juist weer minder.
Tja, smaken verschillen ;)

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Nayade 8 years, 7 months ago

wow!!!!! really beautiful!! ^-^`

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Maciut 8 years, 7 months ago

nice...#1 ;)

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Sherij 8 years, 7 months ago

Very nice! #1 Rocks!!

8 years, 7 months ago Edited
Anka 8 years, 8 months ago

so nice! this light!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Centurio 8 years, 8 months ago

Adorable moment

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Aydin 8 years, 8 months ago

so nice!!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Miclaud 8 years, 8 months ago

The edited one is great!!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Nadoune 8 years, 8 months ago

Beautiful shots !!!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Petres Laszlo 8 years, 8 months ago

Yes , sometimes we need to change the saturation, brightness or anything else, but in this case the best is the original. Try, not to pass trough the natural colours . Nice composition ! What you use for editing?

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Monika 8 years, 8 months ago

I just love the edited version and I could only prove that if you would have heard my ahhhh when I first looked at it :-) for more reasons: the sunrays above the window are visible, I like the dark orange of the shades on the wooden floor, so intense and I think the sun is often like that in reality, her shilouettes are swimming in the same color which i find beautiful. Better contrast, more depth. I think anyone who havent seen the original would beleive the first is not edited at all. And what a beautiful model you have :-)

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Sara G 8 years, 8 months ago

Really nice how the light comes in the windows on #1..:)

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Jonggolde 8 years, 8 months ago

Ik vind de onderste foto het mooist van kleur. Het is alleen jammer dat de muur naar boven toe zo erg schuin loopt.

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Tom 8 years, 8 months ago

The 2nd shot is better more clear not as dark

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Fahimeh 8 years, 8 months ago

Great Work. I like edited Photo. :))

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Pete 8 years, 8 months ago

I like the saturation

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Maria 8 years, 8 months ago

I absolutely love the edited version. Great shot and great work! :)

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Jezterr 8 years, 8 months ago

not sure what you used to straighten out the back wall (i'm assuming the warp tool since the windows a little inconsistent) - but there's a feature in ps that you can use to fix perspectives like this. let me know if you wanna learn more.

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Betsy Murphy 8 years, 8 months ago

Awesome!!!!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Jacki 8 years, 8 months ago

Very nice shot! I like the second version... the soft tones fit the subject so nicely for me.

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Igor 8 years, 8 months ago

looks GOOD!

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Pedro Pinho 8 years, 8 months ago

First for sure my friend! Testing, and testing good! :)

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
Michaå‚ 8 years, 8 months ago

Looked good I think ;)

8 years, 8 months ago Edited
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