Great night

by Amir Honarmand February. 06, 2011 4293 views

Tonight we had great night with my dearest friends which I learn photography from them, specially night photography in fact this was my first serious night photography experience, and I hope you like them =, and as always all your constructive criticizes are welcome.

Stars strolling all alone in sky,
I am as lonely as you
On earth.
I will give my anguish to clouds
And I will fill my heart with her name
This time when it rains
My heart's song will be heard.

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Toni 8 years, 11 months ago

Me gustan mucho

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Andrea 9 years ago

Awesome set!

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Kate 9 years ago

Beautiful night landscapes :)

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Angelika Ejtel 9 years ago

To be honnest, I was attracted to leave my comment on this post because of your poem. I have to admit that this time, it matches perfectly the main theme of your photographs! Your elaborate semantic field [i]stars-sky[/i], [i]clouds-rain[/i] gives good foundations for the expression of feelings [i]heart[/i] - [i]anguish[/i]. This is that loneliness without her which provokes suffering on the Earth. The two last lines are very surprising and gives the power to your poem: with the tears of sorrow we could hear what you really feel...(?). By introducing [i]rain[/i], you introduced more sadness. Seriously, I am moved to tears...

"[i]If you love a flower which happens to be on a star, it is sweet at night to gaze at the sky. All the stars are a riot of flowers."[/i] [The Litlle Prince p.99]

PS 1. I like very much these two lines, but I would leave the future simple for both verses:
I will give my anguish to clouds
And I [u]will [/u]fill my heart with her name
PS2. I am unable to comment on your night photography, I am sorry.

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Piotrek 9 years ago

Amazing sky You have here :) Thanks for sharing!

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Dominika 9 years ago

beautiful :)

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Hossein Yekta Arabani 9 years ago

پایان شب سیه سپید است
جالب بود

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Pooriya Delir 9 years ago

do you know what acc pro kuftet beshe! :D

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Lismel 9 years ago

Very good first try Amir ! It seems like you had a lot of fun ! I like the sixth the most. Because the light on the right corner is beautiful, and it makes a very interesting element. The fifth and the fourth seem to be basically the same, but I think that in this case, the fifth is better, because in the fourth, the stars are either too or not enough blurry. It seems like a mistake more than a choice. The last is interesting, but maybe you should have used a even longer time, so the line would be longer as well. But I already like it as it is !
About the poem, it's beautiful. It is just a feeling I have, but it is so romantic, that I believe you thought of your fiancée when you wrote it ;)

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Hanna Westesson 9 years ago

Amazing!

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Josy 9 years ago

Bravo Amir! For me, 4 is the best: it is fantastic (attractive contrasts and good light) and your poem a delight

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Roger 9 years ago

first of all I hope you enjoyed your first night photography session, I definately enjoyed the results. The clarity in 2 and 3 of the constellations are superb. All your shots are great and can't say which one I like best.
very nice set Amir

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Sara G 9 years ago

Love #5, thanks for pointing out 7 sisters..and the last one is just fabulous..looks like a poster about the heavens :-))

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Marsha 9 years ago

Wow, wonderful night skies....great work, Amir!

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Snowpie 9 years ago

hmm lovely! How many stars there are!

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Claire 9 years ago

it s beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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