Guide Me Oh Wise Ones

by Karen May. 21, 2010 205 views

I look to you for knowledge. What would you have done differently with this shot? Composition, post processing, anything. Let me have it!

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Mohd Shahid Adnan 9 years, 9 months ago

I think your focus is a bit off. Your focus point is toward the hair (left side of the photo) A very shallow depth of field like f/2.0 make a bit hard to get all things in focus. Anyway you're doing fine.

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Lotofoto 9 years, 9 months ago

I think you're doing just great! You've got great clarity in her eyes and you have her looking the littlest bit up at you to get great catchlights in her eyes!
Are you using auto white balance? Once you download do you play with the temperature sliders at all? You could warm her up just a tad.
Lastly, I think she's the slightest big over-exposed. Maybe up your shutter speed to 1/300 or 1/350? You can tell by the little patches on her cheeks that look almost white.
It's great to work on just one thing at a time. I think you've nailed focus and now just work on your exposure some :)

9 years, 9 months ago Edited
Masoud مسعود 9 years, 9 months ago

shes lovley

9 years, 9 months ago Edited